Last Call Review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
review-ietf-babel-yang-model-09-genart-lc-bryant-2021-05-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-04-22
Requested 2021-04-08
Authors Mahesh Jethanandani , Barbara Stark
I-D last updated 2021-05-04
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -03 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Loganaden Velvindron (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -09 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-babel-yang-model by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-05-04
review-ietf-babel-yang-model-09-genart-lc-bryant-2021-05-04-00
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Document: draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written text that is ready for publication. Just one note and a
couple of minor nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

5.  Acknowledgements
 Juliusz Chroboczek provided most of the example configurations for babel that
 are shown in the Appendix.

The Appendix seems seems quite substantive, I am surprised that Juliusz was not
listed as an author.

Nits/editorial comments:
2.1.  Information Model

" attributes are marked a read-only objects in the information module"
SB> s/marked a/marked as/

2.3.  YANG Module
"On other hand, for a"

SB> s/On other hand/On the other hand/