Last Call Review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
review-ietf-babel-yang-model-09-genart-lc-bryant-2021-05-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-babel-yang-model |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-04-22 | |
| Requested | 2021-04-08 | |
| Authors | Mahesh Jethanandani , Barbara Stark | |
| Draft last updated | 2021-05-04 | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Early review of -03
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Radek Krejčí
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Yangdoctors Last Call review of -09 by Radek Krejčí (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by Ron Bonica (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Loganaden Velvindron (diff) Genart Last Call review of -09 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Stewart Bryant |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-babel-yang-model-09-genart-lc-bryant-2021-05-04
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/6YHQpye8ztAZnEyJ6ZaDwReO0rc | |
| Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2021-05-04 |
review-ietf-babel-yang-model-09-genart-lc-bryant-2021-05-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2021-05-04 IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-22 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: A well written text that is ready for publication. Just one note and a couple of minor nits. Major issues: None Minor issues: 5. Acknowledgements Juliusz Chroboczek provided most of the example configurations for babel that are shown in the Appendix. The Appendix seems seems quite substantive, I am surprised that Juliusz was not listed as an author. Nits/editorial comments: 2.1. Information Model " attributes are marked a read-only objects in the information module" SB> s/marked a/marked as/ 2.3. YANG Module "On other hand, for a" SB> s/On other hand/On the other hand/