Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-06
review-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-06-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2025-03-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2025-04-10
Requested 2025-03-12
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Ketan Talaulikar , Syed Kamran Raza , Jorge Rabadan , Wen Lin
I-D last updated 2025-07-19 (Latest revision 2025-05-09)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Zheng Zhang (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Mališa Vučinić (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joe Clarke
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/fG3n9HNNlA66clpsu41qygSVL20
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Result Has nits
Completed 2025-03-16
review-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-06-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2025-03-16-00
I have been asked to review this draft on behalf of the OPS directorate.  This
draft updates RFC9252 to add clarity for processing SRv6 SID advertisements for
SRv6 endpoint behaviors that support arguments.  From an OPS perspective, I
think this document is ready.  I particularly appreciated the call to log
likely config errors to aid with troubleshooting.  The additional examples were
also helpful.

Overall, I only found two small nits.  In Section 3:

s/The procedures in this document remains/The procedures in this document
remain/

And in Section 4:

s/the alternative method specified in document/the alternative method specified
in this document/