Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-11
review-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-11-tsvart-lc-eddy-2024-11-13-00

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
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I reviewed the document with regard to some common transport layer type of
issues, such as potential for reordering, etc., and I do not have any specific
concerns to convey.  It looks like the solution described does not seem to
create any new or unusual problems in regard to transport protocols, though
there is not any explicit discussion of how loss, delays, or reordering might
manifest or change during different states of operation.