Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04
review-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04-genart-lc-schinazi-2021-02-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-02-16
Requested 2021-02-02
Authors Samer Salam , Ali Sajassi , Sam Aldrin , John Drake , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
I-D last updated 2021-02-05
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by David Schinazi (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by David L. Black (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Schinazi
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-02-05
review-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04-genart-lc-schinazi-2021-02-05-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2021-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Thank you for a well-written document.
  It introduces a lot of terminology I wasn't used to,
  but does a good job of explaining it.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
  - The abstract defines all the acronyms (which is great) except PBB, could it define that one too?
  - Section 2.1 doesn't really explain what a "P node" is.