Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04
review-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2021-02-17-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
Deadline | 2021-02-16 | |
Requested | 2021-02-02 | |
Requested by | Martin Vigoureux | |
Authors | Samer Salam , Ali Sajassi , Sam Aldrin , John Drake , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd | |
I-D last updated | 2021-02-17 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -04
by Stig Venaas
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Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Melinda Shore (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by David Schinazi (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by David L. Black (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Melinda Shore (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Stig Venaas |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/oXvEiducMz5vfS6hFAgqg0Q4p4k | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 10) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2021-02-15 |
review-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2021-02-17-00
I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04.txt Reviewer: Stig Venaas Review Date: 2021-02-15 IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16 Intended Status: Informational Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. Comments: This is the best written draft I've read in a long time. Thanks for that! I could not find any issues, except one very minor nit. Nits: As mentioned in some other reviews, it might be good to add the term P to the terminology section. Regards, Stig