Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07
review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07-genart-lc-even-2018-02-08-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-09
Requested 2018-01-26
Other Reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -08 by Russ White
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07-genart-lc-even-2018-02-08
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/-3GdIf8dKuLFmy15UryMKm5hs8M
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-02-08
Review completed: 2018-02-08

Review
review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07-genart-lc-even-2018-02-08

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-09
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
In section 3.1 toward the end "For example, we can use ingress replication for on EVI100" no need for "for on"