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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08
review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-02-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-09
Requested 2018-01-26
Authors Jorge Rabadan , Senad Palislamovic , Wim Henderickx , Ali Sajassi , Jim Uttaro
I-D last updated 2018-02-22
Completed reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -08 by Russ White (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-02-22
review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-02-22-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This Informational document discusses the usage and applicability of BGP MPLS
based Ethernet VPN (EVPN) in a common deployment scenario. This document is
well written. It is ready with minor issues.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Personal comments: although this document claims it focuses on a "simple" and
fairly common deployment  scenario, it is still complicated giving many aspects
of EVPN. It is hard to read giving the many technical details. I am thinking it
may helpful for readers if there was a minimum scenario to be described.
Overall, the document is well written and useful already. So please feel safe
to ignore my personal suggestion.

Regards,

Sheng