Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08
review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08-rtgdir-telechat-white-2018-02-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2018-02-20
Requested 2018-01-26
Requested by Alvaro Retana
Draft last updated 2018-02-20
Completed reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -08 by Russ White (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ White
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08-rtgdir-telechat-white-2018-02-20
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-02-20

Review
review-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08-rtgdir-telechat-white-2018-02-20

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08.txt
Reviewer: Russ White 
Review Date: 19 February 2018
IETF LC End Date: 22 February 2018 
Intended Status: Informational

Summary: 

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:

I (generally) find the eVPN drafts difficult to read, but this is mostly a style issue, rather than an issue with technical content or any specific grammar issue. Overall, however, this document is very useful in describing a use case for eVPN, including the control plane setup necessary, and packet forwarding. The draft appears to be technically correct in the process it describes. 

Major Issues:

No major issues found.

Minor Issues:

No minor issues found.

😊 /r