Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08
review-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2023-04-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 19) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2023-04-27 | |
| Requested | 2023-04-13 | |
| Authors | Ali Sajassi , Patrice Brissette , Rick Schell , John Drake , Jorge Rabadan | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-04-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -13 by Brian Haberman (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/KDZjDqHYF-nUsxkJvt9EykS0-kw | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 19) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2023-04-24 |
review-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2023-04-24-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2023-04-24 IETF LC End Date: 2023-04-27 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other comments than those on the list. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -Section 1 , "This document extends the Ethernet Segment concept so that an ES can be associated to a set of EVCs (e.g., VLANs) or other objects such as MPLS Label Switch Paths (LSPs) or Pseudowires (PWs), referred to as Virtual Ethernet Segments (vES)." & Section 1.1 It would be great to add a sentence on why we need this and what is the current alternative. -[Page 20], Section 5.4, "large numbe of "--->"large number of "