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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08
review-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2023-04-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-04-27
Requested 2023-04-13
Authors Ali Sajassi , Patrice Brissette , Rick Schell , John Drake , Jorge Rabadan
I-D last updated 2023-04-24
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -13 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-04-24
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2023-04-24
IETF LC End Date: 2023-04-27
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
comments than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-Section 1 , "This document extends the Ethernet Segment concept so that an ES
can
   be associated to a set of EVCs (e.g., VLANs) or other objects such as
   MPLS Label Switch Paths (LSPs) or Pseudowires (PWs), referred to as
   Virtual Ethernet Segments (vES)." & Section 1.1

It would be great to add a sentence on why we need this and what is the current
alternative.

-[Page 20], Section 5.4, "large numbe of "--->"large number of "