Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15
review-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15-genart-lc-robles-2018-09-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-09-03
Requested 2018-08-20
Authors Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Hiroshi Tsunoda
I-D last updated 2018-09-02
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -16 by Mahesh Jethanandani
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Ines Robles (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-09-02
review-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15-genart-lc-robles-2018-09-02-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2018-09-02
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and
clear to understand.

This document defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB) for
use with network management protocols in the Internet community. In particular,
it describes common managed objects used by other MIB modules which are
designed for monitoring and/or configuring both Layer 2 and Layer 3 Virtual
Private Networks (VPN) that support multicast.

Major issues: Not found

Minor issues: Not found

Nits/editorial comments: Not found