Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-ingress-replication-02

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-ingress-replication
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-10-13
Requested 2015-09-28
Authors Zhaohui Zhang, Yakov Rekhter, Andrew Dolganow
Draft last updated 2015-10-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Warren Kumari
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-ingress-replication-02-opsdir-lc-kumari-2015-10-19
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 04)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2015-10-19


Be ye not afraid.

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be
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WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-ingress-replication-03

Summary: Ready, typo / grammar nits.

I found this document to be very dense. At some point my brain started
dribbling out my ears and I largely gave up on trying to understand
the mechanism. This seems to be very much a niche application, and my
IP multicast and deep MPLS knowledge isn't up to the level of finding
issues with the logic.


This document specifiess how
[O] specifiess
[P] specifies
[R] spelling

1: Introduction:
   With these two methods, all PEs of a particular VPN are separated
[O] all PEs
[P] all PEs (Provider Edge router)
[R] first use of acronym. The document does say it assumed familiarity
with terminology from [RFC5015], [RFC6513], [RFC6514], and [RFC7582],
but this is before that, and also expanding PE here will help people
understand if they want to continue reading...


I don't think the execution is relevant when it was obviously a bad
idea in the first place.
This is like putting rabid weasels in your pants, and later expressing
regret at having chosen those particular rabid weasels and that pair
of pants.