Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09
review-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2018-09-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2018-09-24
Requested 2018-05-07
Requested by Martin Vigoureux
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Christian Huitema (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
Review review-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2018-09-12
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/cbi-9ti-fhwtzOSgq61dDK553wE
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 12)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2018-09-12
Review completed: 2018-09-12

Review
review-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2018-09-12

This is a very well written and detailed document.

I have only one concern, which I believe should be addressed before moving this document forward:

I found the rational and specific details on what this document "Updates" from three previous RFCs to be lacking, and confusing.

I recommend an "Updates from RFC XYZ" section in which there is a textual explanation and ideally Old/New specifics on how this document updates previous RFCs. At least, something more inline with current thinking as per https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ietf/current/msg109106.html

Thanks,

Carlos Pignataro.