Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01
review-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01-opsdir-lc-banks-2015-09-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-09-29
Requested 2015-09-11
Authors David Allan , Jeff Tantsura , Don Fedyk , Ali Sajassi
I-D last updated 2015-09-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 02)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-09-30
review-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01-opsdir-lc-banks-2015-09-30-00
Howdy,
        I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
        ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
        IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
        operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed
        in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. 
        Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
        any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for Publication

        This draft is well written, straight forward, and concise. I might use
        this as an example of how to write a draft in my WG. One slight (and
        moot) note - contrary to the doc writeup, there's been an IPR filed.

Thanks
Sarah