Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08
review-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08-genart-lc-even-2021-11-22-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-11-24 | |
| Requested | 2021-11-10 | |
| Authors | Gaurav Dawra , Ketan Talaulikar , Robert Raszuk , Bruno Decraene , Shunwan Zhuang , Jorge Rabadan | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-11-22 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -05
by Sasha Vainshtein
(diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Sasha Vainshtein (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff) Genart Last Call review of -08 by Roni Even (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/WPmatZhNIemUA7Z6mGSR50ynDjw | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 15) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-11-22 |
review-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08-genart-lc-even-2021-11-22-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2021-11-22 IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-24 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with editorial comment. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: An editorial comment: I suggest that the introduction section will start with the description of the protocol. it can use the text from the abstract with the text from the last two paragraph of the introspection section that should move to the start of the section. The definitions / terminology should follow or be in a sub section.