Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-13
review-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-13-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2017-01-10-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2017-01-11 | |
Requested | 2016-12-21 | |
Authors | Victor Pascual , Anton Roman , Stephane Cazeaux , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Ram R | |
I-D last updated | 2017-01-10 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -13
by Robert Sparks
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Bert Wijnen (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Bert Wijnen |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 15) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2017-01-10 |
review-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-13-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2017-01-10-00
First: happy new year to all I did OPSDIR review for document draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-13 Summary: ready for publication I do not see any specific operations and/or management issues with this document. Notes/nits/questions: - In the IANA considerations you register bfcp (lower case), i.e.: Subprotocol Identifier: bfcp while in the examples (like on page 5), you specify: Sec-WebSocket-Protocol: BFCP (upper case) Is the keyword 'bfcp' case insensistive? If so, maybe this could be specified/described somewhere. If not, is then the example or the registration incorrect? - You use the acronyms WS and WSS several times. I think they stand for WebSocketand Secure WebSocket? But I did not see that those acronyms were ever expanded in the draft text. Might be good to so so at least once (on first occurrance) Thanks, Bert Wijnen