Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09
review-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-06-18
Requested 2018-06-04
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/x8opy_rNdU0_wD99w4VHs1tj2yo
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-06-28
Review completed: 2018-06-28

Review
review-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-06-28
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-18
IESG Telechat date: 2018-07-05

Summary: clear writing of the procedure. 

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

Are End points that not responding considered "Inactive Tails"?  Does the HeadEnd report the "Inactive Tails"? 

Linda Dunbar