Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09
review-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-06-18
Requested 2018-06-04
Authors Dave Katz , David Ward , Santosh Pallagatti , Greg Mirsky
I-D last updated 2018-06-28
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-06-28
review-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-06-28
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-18
IESG Telechat date: 2018-07-05

Summary: clear writing of the procedure.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Are End points that not responding considered "Inactive Tails"?  Does the
HeadEnd report the "Inactive Tails"?

Linda Dunbar