Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-08
review-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-08-genart-lc-romascanu-2016-03-29-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-04-12 | |
| Requested | 2016-03-24 | |
| Authors | Carlos Pignataro , David Ward , Nobo Akiya , Manav Bhatia , Santosh Pallagatti | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-03-29 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by
Dan Romascanu
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Shawn M Emery (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Dan Romascanu |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-08-genart-lc-romascanu-2016-03-29
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| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2016-03-29 |
review-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-08-genart-lc-romascanu-2016-03-29-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >. Document: draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-09 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2016/3/29 IETF LC End Date: 2016/4/12 IESG Telechat date: 2016/5/5 Summary: Ready The document is well written and complete, but requires a good understanding of BFD (RFC 5880) and of the use-cases (draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case) document. I raised three (no show-stopper) issues in my first review. Two of them let to clarification and editorial improvements in the text. The third one was clarified in the mail exchange with the authors and I agree that no change is acceptable. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1.