Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-ip-03
review-ietf-bfd-seamless-ip-03-genart-lc-romascanu-2016-03-29-00

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Document:

draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-ip-0

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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 2016/5/4

IETF LC End Date: 2016/4/12

IESG Telechat date: 2016/5/5



Summary: Ready with one issue



The document is well written and complete, but requires a good understanding of
BFD (RFC 5880, RFC 5881) and of the use-cases
(draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case) document.



In my initial review I raised two issues. One was accepted and an editorial
change was made in draft-04. The second one was:



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This document extends the usage of port 3785 adding the function of being the
destination port for the S-BFD echo packets. Should not this be regarded as an
update of RFC 5881 and mentioned as such on the
 front page?





The authors answered the following:



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I do not have a strong opinion one way or another — I will leave this one to
the AD’s guidance, and I am happy to mark this document as updating RFC 5881 if
that’s the preferred direction



No change was made. I would like to make sure that the responsible AD has seen
this comment. It’s not a show-stopper, but I still believe that marking this
document as an update to RFC 5881 is better.



Major issues:



Minor issues:



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