Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12
review-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12-intdir-telechat-krishnan-2022-04-18-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2022-04-17 | |
| Requested | 2022-04-06 | |
| Requested by | Éric Vyncke | |
| Authors | Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Tony Przygienda , Andrew Dolganow , Hooman Bidgoli , IJsbrand Wijnands , Arkadiy Gulko | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-04-18 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -11
by Russ White
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Vincent Roca (diff) Genart Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -12 by Suresh Krishnan (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/KXUlJRKxuG_S2O3YSNJLg_ZwABc | |
| Reviewed revision | 12 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready w/issues | |
| Completed | 2022-04-18 |
review-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12-intdir-telechat-krishnan-2022-04-18-00
This document is short and clear and easy to understand for someone who has a basic understanding of BIER. I do have one minor issue that probably needs to get addressed/clarified * Section 3: Step 3: "If BA is NULL" -> What exactly does this mean? Does this mean BAR==0? If so, it might be good to state this explicitly and I suggest pulling forward the text from Section 3.1. to clarify BAR==0 means that BA is NULL and BC is NULL. If not, can you please clarify? i.e. do you expect there to be a NULL BA with a BAR<>0?