Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-20
Requested 2018-02-08
Draft last updated 2018-02-20
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-02-20

Review
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20

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Document: draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22 ?
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-please updated references to latest draft version/RFC number
-Section 2 would be clearer is the definitions introduced only in this document are identified as such
-Please spell out  multi topology, sub-domain at  first use for MT SD
-[Page 6], "advertisments."--->"advertisements"
-[Page 8], "occurences"--->"occurrences"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com