Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-20
Requested 2018-02-08
Authors Les Ginsberg , Tony Przygienda , Sam Aldrin , Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang
I-D last updated 2018-02-20
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-02-20
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22 ?
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-please updated references to latest draft version/RFC number
-Section 2 would be clearer is the definitions introduced only in this document
are identified as such -Please spell out  multi topology, sub-domain at  first
use for MT SD -[Page 6], "advertisments."--->"advertisements" -[Page 8],
"occurences"--->"occurrences"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com