Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-07
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-07-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2018-02-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-20
Requested 2018-02-08
Authors Les Ginsberg , Tony Przygienda , Sam Aldrin , Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang
I-D last updated 2018-02-21
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joe Clarke
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-07-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2018-02-21
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 11)
Result Has nits
Completed 2018-02-21
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-07-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2018-02-21-00
I am reviewing  draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-07 on behalf of the ops
directorate in an effort to ensure attention to operational considerations. 
This document defines a new sub-TLV for IS-IS for use with BIER.  It also
defines an IANA registry for additional sub-sub-TLVs for this new BIER sub-TLV.
 Overall, this document is ready with some nits.

The only substantive comment I have is in section 5.6 regarding reporting
misconfigurations.  What is not stated is _how_ this is to be done.  There is
no reference to a standard BIER or IS-IS mechanism with how this reporting
should be carried out.  For operational consistency, I feel some guidance
should be offered.

The one nit I noticed is in section 6.2:

OLD:

Label ranges in multiple sub-sub-TLV MUST NOT overlap.

NEW:

Label ranges in multiple sub-sub-TLVs MUST NOT overlap.