Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09
review-ietf-bier-mvpn-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-02-01-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bier-mvpn |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-01-31 | |
| Requested | 2018-01-17 | |
| Authors | Eric C. Rosen , Mahesh Sivakumar , Sam Aldrin , Andrew Dolganow , Tony Przygienda | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-02-01 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -09
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Derek Atkins (diff) Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bier-mvpn by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-02-01 |
review-ietf-bier-mvpn-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-02-01-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-01-26 IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-30 IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 5], Sec 2, "may replaced"---->"may be replaced" -Section 9.1, ref [BIER_ARCH] is now RFC Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com