Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
review-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07-genart-lc-robles-2021-05-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-05-24
Requested 2021-05-10
Authors sudhin jacob , Kishore Tiruveedhula
I-D last updated 2021-05-24
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -07 by Jana Iyengar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Ines Robles (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/PhrPOZBNQgl794sIx6c5uYijlyY
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-05-24
review-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07-genart-lc-robles-2021-05-24-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-05-24
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document defines methodologies for benchmarking Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and
Provider Backbone Bridging EVPN (PBB-EVPN) performance. This document is
Informational. No major issues found.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
- Check punctuation, some sentences do not start with space after period.  e.g.
page 16 "... sample.The time ..." - Some paragraphs do not start with
upper-case letter. e.g. page 10, "confirm the DUT..." - I would expand PBB-EVPN
the first time used.  Perhaps in the introduction, "Provider Backbone Bridging
EVPN (PBB-EVPN) is defined in RFC 7623, discussing how can be combined with
EVPNs to provide a new/combined solution...."

Thank you for this document,

Ines