Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04
review-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04-genart-lc-halpern-2017-02-05-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-02-15 | |
Requested | 2017-02-01 | |
Authors | Al Morton | |
I-D last updated | 2017-02-05 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -04
by Sean Turner
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2017-02-05 |
review-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04-genart-lc-halpern-2017-02-05-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-?? Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2017-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-15 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: The second figure in section 4.4 talks about the use of multiple 3x3 tables, but appears to show the use of multiple 4x4 tables. This reader found himself confused. Nits/editorial comments: