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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04
review-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04-genart-lc-halpern-2017-02-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-15
Requested 2017-02-01
Authors Al Morton
I-D last updated 2017-02-05
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Sean Turner (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-02-05
review-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04-genart-lc-halpern-2017-02-05-00
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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
    The second figure in section 4.4 talks about the use of multiple 3x3
    tables, but appears to show the use of multiple 4x4 tables.  This reader
    found himself confused.

Nits/editorial comments: