Telechat Review of draft-ietf-calext-rscale-03
review-ietf-calext-rscale-03-opsdir-telechat-wijnen-2015-02-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-calext-rscale |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-02-17 | |
| Requested | 2015-01-31 | |
| Authors | Cyrus Daboo, Gregory Yakushev | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-02-17 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Telechat review of -03 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -03 by Bert Wijnen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Bert Wijnen |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-calext-rscale-03-opsdir-telechat-wijnen-2015-02-17 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2015-02-17 |
Review
review-ietf-calext-rscale-03-opsdir-telechat-wijnen-2015-02-17
I did the OPS-DIR review for this document. OPS-DIR review
means that I/we look specifically for potential operational
and network manegement aspects.
Summary: document is ready for publication.
I do not see any concerns related to operational or nm aspects.
The document could possibly (but that is not a requirement) make such a
statement that it indeed does not have any operational (network
operations) or nm considerations.
I see one possible nit/typo:
I see on page 8:
4.2.2. Ethiopic 13th Month
Consider the following set of iCalendar properties:
DTSTART;VALUE=DATE:201300906
Is that date spec correct? or should it be (9 Sept 2013?):
DTSTART;VALUE=DATE:20130906
Bert Wijnen
p.s. I am on vacation from feb 12 - 19 inclusive and will probably not see any email
on this thread during that time.