Last Call Review of draft-ietf-capport-api-07
review-ietf-capport-api-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2020-05-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-capport-api
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-05-11
Requested 2020-04-27
Authors Tommy Pauly, Darshak Thakore
Draft last updated 2020-05-03
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-capport-api-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2020-05-03
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/MFozeC0ZtyQY8C-UUOh7z32o3rg
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2020-05-03

Review
review-ietf-capport-api-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2020-05-03

https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-capport-api-07.html

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-capport-api-07

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Document: draft-ietf-capport-api-07.html
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2020-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-11
IESG Telechat date:  

Summary: Ready (almost...)
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Minor Issue:
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>      If the client is captive (i.e. captive=true),
>      it can still be allowed enough access for it to perform server
>      authentication Section 4.1.

What does "can" mean? MAY or perhaps SHOULD? Is this a local policy decision?

Nit:
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>      If the client is captive (i.e. captive=true),
>      it can still be allowed enough access for it to perform server
>      authentication Section 4.1.

Missing parentheses around "Section 4.1"?