Last Call Review of draft-ietf-capport-api-07
review-ietf-capport-api-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2020-05-03-00

https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-capport-api-07.html

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-capport-api-07

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Document: draft-ietf-capport-api-07.html
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2020-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-11
IESG Telechat date:  

Summary: Ready (almost...)
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Minor Issue:
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>      If the client is captive (i.e. captive=true),
>      it can still be allowed enough access for it to perform server
>      authentication Section 4.1.

What does "can" mean? MAY or perhaps SHOULD? Is this a local policy decision?

Nit:
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>      If the client is captive (i.e. captive=true),
>      it can still be allowed enough access for it to perform server
>      authentication Section 4.1.

Missing parentheses around "Section 4.1"?