Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cbor-7049bis-14
review-ietf-cbor-7049bis-14-genart-lc-evens-2020-08-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cbor-7049bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-08-14
Requested 2020-07-24
Authors Carsten Bormann, Paul Hoffman
Draft last updated 2020-08-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -14 by Tim Evens (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -14 by Eve Schooler (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Evens 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-cbor-7049bis-14-genart-lc-evens-2020-08-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/5xzoQ8pflnq5cILgafBWKNge2i0
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-08-13

Review
review-ietf-cbor-7049bis-14-genart-lc-evens-2020-08-13

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Document: draft-ietf-cbor-7049bis-??
Reviewer: Tim Evens
Review Date: 2020-08-13
IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: 
Overall good, but a little on the verbose side which can result in one skipping over important details.   

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