Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05
review-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05-genart-telechat-yee-2012-09-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-09-11 | |
| Requested | 2012-08-23 | |
| Authors | Lou Berger , François Le Faucheur , Ashok Narayanan | |
| I-D last updated | 2012-09-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Peter E. Yee
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Leif Johansson |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2012-09-06 |
review-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05-genart-telechat-yee-2012-09-06-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-06-2012 IETF LC End Date: Aug-29-2012 IESG Telechat date: Sep-13-2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that could be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] Generally, the diffs between -04 and -05 look fine to me and incorporate my previously offered suggestions. Nit: Section 4, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: "identifies" -> "identify".