Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05
review-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05-genart-telechat-yee-2012-09-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-09-11
Requested 2012-08-23
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Peter Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of - by Leif Johansson (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Peter Yee
Review review-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05-genart-telechat-yee-2012-09-06
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg07741.html
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2012-09-06
Review completed: 2012-09-06

Review
review-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05-genart-telechat-yee-2012-09-06

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Sep-06-2012
IETF LC End Date: Aug-29-2012
IESG Telechat date: Sep-13-2012

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that
could be
fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.]

Generally, the diffs between -04 and -05 look fine to me and incorporate my
previously offered suggestions.

Nit:

Section 4, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: "identifies" -> "identify".