Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-info-
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 03)|
|Type||Last Call Review|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
|Draft last updated||2012-05-14|
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Ben Campbell
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Yoav Nir
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-info-03 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2012-06-14 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- 2.1, 1st paragraph: Please expand RSVP-TE on first mention. -- 2.1, 2nd paragraph: "...can take place independent from..." s/independent/independently -- 2.2, paragraph 5: "... definition of the Association ID, which is (quoting [RFC4872]):" The quoted text this refers to is more of a description of use than a definition.