Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-info-
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-05-14
Requested 2012-05-01
Draft last updated 2012-05-14
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Ben Campbell
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Yoav Nir
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ccamp-assoc-info-genart-lc-campbell-2012-05-14
Review completed: 2012-05-14

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-info-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-06-14
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- 2.1, 1st paragraph:

Please expand RSVP-TE on first mention.

-- 2.1, 2nd paragraph: "...can take place independent from..."

s/independent/independently

-- 2.2, paragraph 5: "... definition of the Association ID, which is (quoting [RFC4872]):"

The quoted text this refers to is more of a description of use than a definition.