Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07
review-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07-rtgdir-telechat-niven-jenkins-2016-12-20-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
Deadline | 2016-12-22 | |
Requested | 2016-12-09 | |
Requested by | Jonathan Hardwick | |
Authors | Xian Zhang , Haomian Zheng , Ramon Casellas , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios , Daniele Ceccarelli | |
I-D last updated | 2016-12-20 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Telechat review of -07
by Ben Niven-Jenkins
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Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Bert Wijnen (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Catherine Meadows (diff) Genart Last Call review of -07 by Pete Resnick (diff) Genart Telechat review of -08 by Pete Resnick (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Ben Niven-Jenkins |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2016-12-20 |
review-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07-rtgdir-telechat-niven-jenkins-2016-12-20-00
Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07.txt Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins Review Date: 20th Dec 2016 Intended Status: Standards Track Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication. Comments: The document is well written and straightforward to read. Major Issues: No major issues found. Minor Issues: No minor issues found. Nits: Abstract: s/know/known/ Section 3.3: s/thus/this/ Thanks Ben