Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2016-12-22
Requested 2016-12-09
Requested by Jonathan Hardwick
Authors Xian Zhang, Haomian Zheng, Ramon Casellas, Oscar de Dios, Daniele Ceccarelli
Draft last updated 2016-12-20
Completed reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Ben Niven-Jenkins (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Niven-Jenkins 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07-rtgdir-telechat-niven-jenkins-2016-12-20
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-12-20



I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ‚Äč

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07.txt 
Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review Date: 20th Dec 2016
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments: The document is well written and straightforward to read.

Major Issues: No major issues found.

Minor Issues: No minor issues found.


Abstract: s/know/known/

Section 3.3: s/thus/this/