Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-rsvp-te-ext-03
review-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-rsvp-te-ext-03-opsdir-telechat-tsou-2015-11-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-rsvp-te-ext
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-11-17
Requested 2015-10-31
Authors Fatai Zhang , Xian Zhang , Adrian Farrel , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios , Daniele Ceccarelli
I-D last updated 2015-11-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -03 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU)
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-rsvp-te-ext by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 05)
Result Has issues
Completed 2015-11-16
review-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-rsvp-te-ext-03-opsdir-telechat-tsou-2015-11-16-00

Dear all,



I have reviewed this document as part of the operations directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operation
 area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
 just like any other last call comments.



** Technical **



* Abstract:

I think the abstract should note the new ctypes that are specified in this
document, and what these c-types are used for.



* Section 4.1:



This section should clearly state that m should be interpreted as an unsigned
integer.



* Section 4.1:



This section should clearly state that m should be interpreted as an unsigned
integer.





* Section 5.1, page 8:

>    IANA is requested to assign the same value for TBD1 and TBD2, and a

>    value of 8 is suggested.



Why do you suggest the value "8"?







** Editorial **



* Abstract:



>    This memo describes the extensions to the Resource reserVation

>    Protocol Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE) signaling protocol to support

>    Label Switched Paths (LSPs) in a GMPLS-controlled network that

>    includes devices using the flexible optical grid.



s/Resource/ReSource/.





Thank you,

Tina