Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11
review-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-09-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-09-19 | |
| Requested | 2013-09-05 | |
| Authors | Sergio Belotti , Pietro Grandi , Daniele Ceccarelli , Diego Caviglia , Fatai Zhang , Dan Li | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-09-26 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Christer Holmberg
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Christer Holmberg (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Christer Holmberg |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2013-09-26 |
review-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-09-26-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 26 September 2013 IETF LC End Date: 19 September, 2013 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, and ready for publication, but contains some editorial issues that I suggest that the authors consider addressing. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: General: ----------- Q_G_1: The document says “ITU-T recommendation G.XXX”, “ITU-T G.XXX”, and “G.XXX”. Please use consistent terminology. Section 3: ------------- Q_3_1: The text says “ITU-T recommendation defines”. I guess that shall be G.709?