Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-09-19
Requested 2013-09-05
Authors Sergio Belotti, Pietro Grandi, Daniele Ceccarelli, Diego Caviglia, Fatai Zhang, Dan Li
Draft last updated 2013-09-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-09-26
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-09-26


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Document:                         draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11

Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                     26 September 2013

IETF LC End Date:             19 September, 2013

IESG Telechat date:         N/A


Summary:           The document is well written, and ready for publication, but contains some editorial issues that I suggest that the authors consider addressing.


Major issues: -


Minor issues: -


Nits/editorial comments:






                Q_G_1: The document says “ITU-T recommendation G.XXX”, “ITU-T G.XXX”, and “G.XXX”. Please use consistent terminology.



Section 3:



                Q_3_1: The text says “ITU-T recommendation defines”. I guess that shall be G.709?