Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-control-triggers-11
review-ietf-cdni-control-triggers-11-genart-lc-even-2015-12-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cdni-control-triggers
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-21
Requested 2015-12-10
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-cdni-control-triggers-11-genart-lc-even-2015-12-21
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg12735.html
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2015-12-21
Review completed: 2015-12-21

Review
review-ietf-cdni-control-triggers-11-genart-lc-even-2015-12-21

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document:  

draft-ietf-cdni-control-triggers-11

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015–1

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IETF LC End Date: 2015–1

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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC

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Nits/editorial comments:

I think that having a state diagram in section 4 can help, this is an editorial comment