Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-09
review-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-09-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2024-07-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-06-25 | |
| Requested | 2024-06-11 | |
| Authors | Frédéric Fieau , Emile Stephan , Guillaume Bichot , Christoph Neumann | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-10-31 (Latest revision 2024-09-05) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08
by Mallory Knodel
(diff)
Secdir Early review of -06 by Mike Ounsworth (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jouni Korhonen |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/BsoisxgNNDyuQEn6yrb4u8gtZUs | |
| Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2024-07-03 |
review-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-09-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2024-07-03-00
I am the assigned OPSDIR reviewer for this document.
Summary: the document is ready for publication with nits. I have no operational
concerns.
However, there are downrefs to RFC7336 and RFC7337. Couldn't these
Informational references (as they are generic framework and
requirements documents)?
Editorial nits:
* Several acronyms are not expanded: CDN, CDNI, CSP.. The authors are
encouraged to expands all used acromyns in the first use.