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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-09
review-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-09-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2024-07-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-06-25
Requested 2024-06-11
Authors Frédéric Fieau , Emile Stephan , Guillaume Bichot , Christoph Neumann
I-D last updated 2024-07-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Secdir Early review of -06 by Mike Ounsworth (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/BsoisxgNNDyuQEn6yrb4u8gtZUs
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 12)
Result Has nits
Completed 2024-07-03
review-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-09-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2024-07-03-00
I am the assigned OPSDIR reviewer for this document.

Summary: the document is ready for publication with nits. I have no operational
concerns.
         However, there are downrefs to RFC7336 and RFC7337. Couldn't these
         Informational references (as they are generic framework and
         requirements documents)?

Editorial nits:
* Several acronyms are not expanded: CDN, CDNI, CSP..  The authors are
encouraged to expands all used acromyns in the first use.