Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03
review-ietf-cdni-media-type-03-genart-lc-dupont-2015-10-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cdni-media-type
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-10-13
Requested 2015-09-29
Authors Kevin Ma
Draft last updated 2015-10-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-cdni-media-type-03-genart-lc-dupont-2015-10-08
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-10-08

Review
review-ietf-cdni-media-type-03-genart-lc-dupont-2015-10-08

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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151002
IETF LC End Date: 20151013
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - In 1 page 2: the CDNI abbrev should be introduced (i.e., the Abstract
  is considered as independent). Note that formally CDN and JSON abbrevs
  should be introduced too but IMHO it is no necessary here.

 - 2.1 page 3: RFCthis -> this RFC

 - 3.1 page 5: the Nits checker complains the RFC2119 reference is unused.

BTW I saw the 04 version was published (without problematic changes
rom 03).

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr