Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-04
review-ietf-cdni-media-type-04-opsdir-lc-dodge-2015-10-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-cdni-media-type |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-10-13 | |
| Requested | 2015-10-09 | |
| Authors | Kevin J. Ma | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-10-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Francis Dupont
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Menachem Dodge (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Menachem Dodge |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-cdni-media-type by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2015-10-19 |
review-ietf-cdni-media-type-04-opsdir-lc-dodge-2015-10-19-00
Hello, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This intended status of this document is Informational. This document defines a standard media type to be used by the Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) protocol suite. It also defines a payload type parameter. The document requests that IANA should register the CDNI media type and keep a registry for the payload type parameter. NITS ==== "Introduction and Scope" section 4th sentence ------------------------------------------------------------------ OLD: To accomplish this aims, this document defines SUGGEST: To accomplish this aim, this document defines I found that the organization of the document caused me some difficulty because the definition of the media type and payload type parameter was handled within the request to IANA. Normally a separate IANA section is added at the end of the document which refers to the items in the main document body. I have no further issues. Thank you kindly, Menachem.