Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18
review-ietf-cdni-metadata-18-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-06-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-06-27
Requested 2016-06-16
Authors Ben Niven-Jenkins , Rob Murray , Matt Caulfield , Kevin J. Ma
I-D last updated 2020-01-21 (Latest revision 2016-08-28)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -18 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -19 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -18 by Dacheng Zhang (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-cdni-metadata by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 18 (document currently at 21)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2016-06-28
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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2016-06-27

IETF LC End Date:  2016-06-27

IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07





Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments.



Major issues:



Minor issues:





Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 19]:

"

Property: pattern

         Description: A pattern for string matching.  The pattern can

         contain the wildcards * and ?, where * matches any sequence of

         characters (including the empty string) and ? matches exactly

         one character.  The three literals $, * and ? should be escaped

         as $$, $* and $?. All other characters are treated as literals.

"



Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the one
character match?





-[Page 20], section 4.1.6,

"to evaulate"--typo-->"to evaluate"

"is specifed"--typo-->"is specified"



-[Page 24], section 4.2.1.1

"objecct,"--typo-->"object,"



-[Page 50-54], sections 7.1.1 to 7.1.20

"capabilitiy"--typo?-->"capability" (many times)



-General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"?



Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson Research

www.ericsson.com