Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18
review-ietf-cdni-metadata-18-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-06-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-06-27
Requested 2016-06-16
Authors Ben Niven-Jenkins, Rob Murray, Matt Caulfield, Kevin Ma
Draft last updated 2016-06-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -18 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -19 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -18 by Dacheng Zhang (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-cdni-metadata-18-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-06-28
Reviewed rev. 18 (document currently at 21)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2016-06-28

Review
review-ietf-cdni-metadata-18-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-06-28






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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2016-06-27




IETF LC End Date:  2016-06-27




IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.




 




Major issues:




 




Minor issues:




 




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 19]:




"




Property: pattern




         Description: A pattern for string matching.  The pattern can




         contain the wildcards * and ?, where * matches any sequence of




         characters (including the empty string) and ? matches exactly




         one character.  The three literals $, * and ? should be escaped




         as $$, $* and $?. All other characters are treated as literals.




"




 




Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the one character match?




 




 




-[Page 20], section 4.1.6, 




"to evaulate"--typo-->"to evaluate"




"is specifed"--typo-->"is specified"




 




-[Page 24], section 4.2.1.1




"objecct,"--typo-->"object,"




 




-[Page 50-54], sections 7.1.1 to 7.1.20




"capabilitiy"--typo?-->"capability" (many times)




 




-General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"?




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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Meral Shirazipour




Ericsson Research




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