Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
review-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2019-09-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2019-08-28
Requested 2019-08-14
Draft last updated 2019-09-09
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Tüxen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2019-09-09
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/bP0X5elzX_jY_KcWyYpdAzgmzBU
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-09-09

Review
review-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2019-09-09

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

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I have not identified any transport related issues.

To improve readability, you might want to
* resolve acronyms on first occurence like CDN, CDNI,...
* Remove section 1.1, since the introduced abbreviations are not used in the text.
* add a graphical representation of the involved nodes and the messages being exchanged between them

Typos:
* Section 3: the uCDN provide a fallback -> the uCDN provides a fallback
* Section 6: Nir B.  Sopher -> Nir B. Sopher (no double space after period)
* Section 6: Kevin J.  Ma -> Kevin J. Ma (no double space after period)