Last Call Review of draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13
review-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13-secdir-lc-salz-2016-05-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-05-23
Requested 2016-05-12
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Stefan Winter (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Rich Salz
Review review-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13-secdir-lc-salz-2016-05-26
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg06576.html
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 17)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2016-05-26
Review completed: 2016-05-26

Review
review-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13-secdir-lc-salz-2016-05-26

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat  these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: this document is ready, perhaps with nits.

You might consider reducing the security considerations part, just to increase emphasis on the fact that while the data described by this schema is potentially very privacy-impacting, it is the *protocol(s)* that need to address those issues.    Perhaps adding an intro sentence like that to the Sec 15 would be useful.

Thanks for the trip down my personal memory line.  Haven't deal with XML Schema since WS-star days :)

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