Last Call Review of draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13
review-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13-secdir-lc-salz-2016-05-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-05-23
Requested 2016-05-12
Authors Roberta Presta , Simon Pietro Romano
I-D last updated 2016-05-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Rich Salz (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Stefan Winter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Rich Salz
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 17)
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-05-26
review-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13-secdir-lc-salz-2016-05-26-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat  these comments just like any
other last call comments.

Summary: this document is ready, perhaps with nits.

You might consider reducing the security considerations part, just to increase
emphasis on the fact that while the data described by this schema is
potentially very privacy-impacting, it is the *protocol(s)* that need to
address those issues.    Perhaps adding an intro sentence like that to the Sec
15 would be useful.

Thanks for the trip down my personal memory line.  Haven't deal with XML Schema
since WS-star days :)

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