Last Call Review of draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-10
review-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-10-genart-lc-gurbani-2016-12-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-12
Requested 2016-12-22
Authors Roni Even , Jonathan Lennox
I-D last updated 2016-12-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2016-12-23
review-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-10-genart-lc-gurbani-2016-12-23-00
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Document: draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-??
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2016-12-23
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-12
IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments:
- S1: s/source of Media, such as from one or more Capture Devices./source of
Media from one or more Capture Devices./ - S1: s/SIP offer answer/SIP
Offer/Answer model/ - S1: s/recommendations, for the CLUE architecture, about
how/recommendations for the CLUE architecture on how/ - S4: s/have main and
slides video sources can/have a primary video source and a slide video source
can/ - S5: s/CaptureIDis/CaptureID is/