Last Call Review of draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-
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Request Review of draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-12
Requested 2012-03-29
Other Reviews Genart Telechat review of - by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Alexey Melnikov
Review review-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-genart-lc-melnikov-2012-04-04
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg07316.html
Draft last updated 2012-04-04
Review completed: 2012-04-04

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review-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-genart-lc-melnikov-2012-04-04

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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-04.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2012-04-04
IETF LC End Date: 2012-04-12
IESG Review: 2012-04-12



Summary: The document is nearly ready for publication as an 


Informational RFC (see one issue below)





Major issues: none

Minor issues:



This might be pedantic, but I think some of your Informational 


references are actually Normative, because they are needed to understand 


the document. See "IESG Statement: Normative and Informative References" 


for more details 


<

http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/normative-informative.html

>.






This almost doesn't matter for an Informational document, however if any 


of 5 drafts becomes Normative, publication of this document as an RFC 


will be delayed. Still, this might be better than just getting it 


published with "work in progress" references.




But otherwise this is a well written document and I enjoyed reading it.


Nits/editorial comments: none