Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07
review-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-04-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-04-09
Requested 2017-03-26
Other Reviews Artart Last Call review of -07 by Mark Nottingham (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -07 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -07 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-04-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/_Sf2TmiROGYL7pEFjE_h8Soh7IY
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Issues
Draft last updated 2017-04-13
Review completed: 2017-04-13

Review
review-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-04-13

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-04-09
IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-09
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I saw some issues.
Major issues:

Minor issues:
-I am not a CoAP expert, but list comments from Mark Nottingham are of concern (to [core] Mon, 10 April 2017 04:07 UTC).


Nits/editorial comments:
-Please spell out acronyms at first use.
-Not sure if other documents address this, but does this document assume fixed CoAP devices as end point (not moving and connectivity is assumed 'the same' during the TCP session?)



Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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