Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07
review-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-04-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-04-09 | |
| Requested | 2017-03-26 | |
| Authors | Carsten Bormann , Simon Lemay , Hannes Tschofenig , Klaus Hartke , Bill Silverajan , Brian Raymor | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-04-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by Meral Shirazipour
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Artart Last Call review of -07 by Mark Nottingham (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -07 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff) Tsvart Telechat review of -07 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready w/issues | |
| Completed | 2017-04-13 |
review-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-04-13-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-04-09 IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-09 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I saw some issues. Major issues: Minor issues: -I am not a CoAP expert, but list comments from Mark Nottingham are of concern (to [core] Mon, 10 April 2017 04:07 UTC). Nits/editorial comments: -Please spell out acronyms at first use. -Not sure if other documents address this, but does this document assume fixed CoAP devices as end point (not moving and connectivity is assumed 'the same' during the TCP session?) Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com