Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11
review-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11-genart-lc-robles-2020-12-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-12-02
Requested 2020-11-18
Authors Christian Amsüss , John Preuß Mattsson , Göran Selander
I-D last updated 2020-12-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Ines Robles (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -11 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -12 by Eliot Lear (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ER7qzVQMzIq6UxLT7h802sXXlPA
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2020-12-02
review-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11-genart-lc-robles-2020-12-02-00
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Document: draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2020-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2020-12-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document specifies the Echo option that enables a CoAP server to verify
the freshness of a request or to force a client to demonstrate reachability at
its claimed network address, and specifies also the Request-Tag that allows the
CoAP server to match block-wise message fragments belonging to the same
request. Also, this document updates RFC7252 with respect to the client Token
processing requirements.

The document is well written, I have some minor questions/comments below.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

1.- It would be nice to have the definition of Freshness into the terminology
section.

2.- Figure 1 and Figure 4 have two columns named "U" (Unsafe), is that Ok?, or
should one of these columns be deleted/renamed?

3- Page 26: Please expand IV.

Thank you for this document,

Ines.