Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-05
review-ietf-core-hop-limit-05-genart-lc-even-2019-09-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-09-27
Requested 2019-09-13
Authors Mohamed Boucadair , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Jon Shallow
I-D last updated 2019-09-22
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-core-hop-limit by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/fQHhy6-m6RiQYk-yX2wWNmw7sas
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2019-09-22
review-ietf-core-hop-limit-05-genart-lc-even-2019-09-22-00
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Document: draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2019-09-22
IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-27
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 6.2 I am not sure why you have CUNR , I did not see these values in
RFC7252 section 12.2 https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7252#section-12.2  or in
the registry

         +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+
         | Number | C | U | N | R | Name             | Reference |
         +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+
         |  TBA2  |   |   |   |   | Hop-Limit        | [RFCXXXX] |
         +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+
             C=Critical, U=Unsafe, N=NoCacheKey, R=Repeatable