Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-observe-14
review-ietf-core-observe-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-core-observe |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-08-19 | |
| Requested | 2014-07-31 | |
| Authors | Klaus Hartke | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-08-11 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -14
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -14 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Dorothy Gellert (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed Snapshot | |
| Review |
review-ietf-core-observe-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-11
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| Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 16) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2014-08-11 |
review-ietf-core-observe-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-11-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-core-observe-14 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-08-08 IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-08 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 12], "entry with with"--typo-->"entry with" -[Page 13], "when the the age"--typo-->"when the age" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com