Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-senml-13
review-ietf-core-senml-13-genart-lc-even-2018-03-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-senml
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-03-30
Requested 2018-03-02
Other Reviews Genart Telechat review of -14 by Roni Even (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-core-senml-13-genart-lc-even-2018-03-27
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/oeQkQZx9dfZoB18jHw0EseFqcMg
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-03-27
Review completed: 2018-03-27

Review
review-ietf-core-senml-13-genart-lc-even-2018-03-27

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Document: draft-ietf-core-senml-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-03-27
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-30
IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. in section 5.1.6 "another devices" should be "other devices" or "another device"
2. in section 8  "It can simply hard code the output replacing the 1-wire device ID starting at byte 0x20 and going to byte 0x2F with it's device ID". I think that the offset ix 0x10 to 0x1f