Telechat Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2020-04-22
Requested 2020-04-13
Authors Klaus Hartke, Michael Richardson
Draft last updated 2020-04-23
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Mandelberg 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-core-stateless-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2020-04-23
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2020-04-18


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is ready with nits.

(nit) In section 3.1, I think "by changing the key used for integration 
protection" should say "integrity" instead of "integration"