Telechat Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06
review-ietf-core-stateless-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2020-04-23-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-core-stateless |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2020-04-22 | |
| Requested | 2020-04-13 | |
| Authors | Klaus Hartke , Michael Richardson | |
| Draft last updated | 2020-04-23 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -05
by
David Mandelberg
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -06 by David Mandelberg (diff) Genart Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | David Mandelberg |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-core-stateless-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2020-04-23
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Ki7U4cu24_BfF4PvIYXNAP-Kh0E | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2020-04-18 |
review-ietf-core-stateless-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2020-04-23-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. The summary of the review is ready with nits. (nit) In section 3.1, I think "by changing the key used for integration protection" should say "integrity" instead of "integration"