Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter-03
review-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter-03-genart-lc-dunbar-2025-01-11-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2025-01-13 | |
Requested | 2024-12-23 | |
Authors | Henk Birkholz , Thomas Fossati , Maik Riechert | |
I-D last updated | 2025-01-11 | |
Completed reviews |
Artart Last Call review of -03
by Shuping Peng
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Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Yingzhen Qu (diff) Genart Last Call review of -03 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Linda Dunbar |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/8ygPHvs7jorNBEdY95O9BJ_FRm4 | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2025-01-11 |
review-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter-03-genart-lc-dunbar-2025-01-11-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter-03 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2025-01-11 IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-13 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document defines two new COSE header parameters, Timestamp then COSE (TTC) and COSE then Timestamp (CTT). The description is pretty straight forward and easy to understand. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: The document provides basic diagrams to illustrate the modes but lacks comprehensive examples of the header parameters in action. It would be nicer to add complete example encodings of COSE messages with the proposed parameter. Best Regards, Linda Dunbar